Pony application - how NOT to do it

I've basically did all that can go wrong with an application and will break it down for you why this is bad:

Name: This is a reference to violent acts. Violent acts are not allowed in this group.

Photo: This pony was made via the pony creator and this is not original art. She also has extra horns, which is not your typical pony and this it is not allowed.

Species: It's an alicorn. No alicorns allowed!

Age: She is too young. Minimum age is 18 human years for your first OC.

Gender: Nothing wrong here. You SHOULDN'T be able to mess THIS up!

Color palette: Not only is this unoriginal, it's really hard on the eye. Black coats are not allowed and that red is neon red. Makes it hard to see the details.

Accessory: She has way too many accessories, only one is allowed!

Bio: Everything that is mentioned in it is wrong.
* You are not allowed to be a psycho pony.
* You are not allowed to murder other ponies or even have that sort of intent tucked away in the back of your mind.
* You are not allowed to have an orphaned OC.
* Her power is completely OP(OverPowered), which is not allowed.
*She didn't mention her job, which you should.
*No birthplace specified.

This is how you DON'T do an OC for this group!

Here is the blank app: [link]
Here is how you should do your oc: [link]